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Cupcakes and Tea
9-01-14

“Oh dear, what's the matter,”
said the Hare to the Hatter
while the Doormouse soundlessly snored.
“What just can't compare,”
said Hatter to Hare,
“is the fact that I'm hungry and bored.”

“Twinkle, twinkle,” was heard
as the sleepy Mouse stirred,
“We're British, by jove, we like tea!”
So the Hare plated up
while Hatter poured cups
and they both had a cupcake or three.
Ok, so a different version of this was floating around my head at 2am this morning, but I decided to remain inside my warm cave and hope I remember it in the morning. I dare say that this version is somewhat better than 2am inspirational drivel.
(Written at work while I have some time to spare with my one supervisor sitting opposite me...scary is it not!)
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Fun for all ages! Cupcakes and Tea by MagicalJoey ( Suggested by OHiNeedTea and Featured by neurotype )

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Waffles-Of-Gondolyn Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is cool! The rhyming lines really drive it forward, and I would love to have a "cupcake or three!" Good job! (= 
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:iconmagicaljoey:
Thank you. I must say I had the most fun writing this. 
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Waffles-Of-Gondolyn Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome! It definitely seems like fun! Poetry is awesome (=
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GuinevereToGwen Feb 14, 2014  Student Writer
Congrats!! This is wonderful! :D
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HystericalSecretPoet Feb 7, 2014  New member
I adore this! I think I will be returning to re-read this, it has brought out my inner child (: 
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Mirror-Draco Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It took me like 10the minutes to find this again... Worth it!
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:iconmagicaljoey:
Thank you :)
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Mirror-Draco Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your totally welcome!
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:icondarkforces84:
Cool story I really like it
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plmethvin Feb 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I love this! So cute!
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