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DFC #18 - Hello

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Hello
18-12-15

Hello.
Are you there God? It’s Jo.
I’d like to say that I know you
As I should do,
And your love is for me,
Is as I see
It really is.
But often I’m amiss
Wondering why
I’m chosen and loved in Your eyes.
Are you there God, It’s Jo;
Hello?
DFC #18 - The Inverted Hexaduad

The Inverted Hexaduad is a syllabic form featuring inverting rhyme and refrains. The syllabic scheme is: 2, 6, 8, 4, 6, 4, 4, 6, 4, 8, 6, 2 and the rhyme scheme is A1, A2, b, b, c, c, d, d, e, e, A2, A1 with the first and second lines closing the poem but inverted. The number of stanzas allowed isn’t specified.

This kinda flowed, except for having to make it rhyme.
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