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Lee Child. Never Go Back: Published by Bantum Press in 2013. Page 134.
Second attempt at found poetry.
It reads:
There, much earlier,
for a reason -- routine whisper.
A(n) identity not known...
feeling was good.
Getting the hell out...not!
Secret meetings busted until worse -- how?
They're dead.
Second attempt at found poetry.
It reads:
There, much earlier,
for a reason -- routine whisper.
A(n) identity not known...
feeling was good.
Getting the hell out...not!
Secret meetings busted until worse -- how?
They're dead.
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- Did the poet intervene on the text? Meaning, is this something new, or is it merely a summarized version of the original text?
I don't think I get this piece
- Does the work fit in the category that it's been placed?
I like the non-visual rendition better. - Can you hear the poet's voice in the new narrative?
I'm too lost to hear you calling... - Does the poem work on it's own? Grammatically and syntactically, is it solid, just like a non-found poem should be?
I'm wandering the halls of an old English Manor - Is there a narrative here, or is it just a list? Does the poem SAY anything?
I think I'll just sit here and mind my own business. I didn't see anything