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History
[98 – Puzzle]
13-02-08

Although events may shock you in their similarity,
History does not repeat itself:
Time has moved on, changed,
And the people are different...
Even if only slightly.

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Why is her history looping like a scratched CD?
Last year’s fights, pain, fear and silence
Are relentless assassins attacking her:
Same problems. Same place.
Same way.

It seems so small, so simple:
The family-sized piece of her history
That repeatedly betrays her...
But it’s not simple to her,
Or the rest of her family.

Are they doomed to walk
In ever-contracting circles
Until death comes to change the path?
Either the problem expires
Or one of the surrounding pieces gets lost:
Altering history.

History may not repeat itself,
But she is trying to do this year’s puzzle
With last year’s pieces...
And last year’s failure
Is approaching.
©2008 ~MagicalJoey
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=Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Feb 13, 2008, 8:04:32 AM
It seems... the only response to this i cangive is

*sigh* :hug: *sigh*

Its like you read my mind :hug:

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~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: Feb 13, 2008, 8:31:41 AM
:hug:

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*plmii:iconplmii: Feb 13, 2008, 12:12:57 PM
Thank you for sharing...keep writing...

~PLMII
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~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: Feb 13, 2008, 12:46:01 PM
Thanks for the comment.

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*x-outsider-x:iconx-outsider-x: Feb 13, 2008, 1:09:36 PM
I don't know the events behind this, but you've written a wonderful poem here. Change the wording ever so slightly, and I could say this was about my life.
:hug:

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He trapped the sound in a square of silence
and folded it away into nothing
~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: Feb 14, 2008, 9:19:05 AM
Thanks.
:hug:

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~khamwon1:iconkhamwon1: Jun 13, 2008, 1:44:22 PM
great piece....i loved the scratched CD referance.

and this :"But she is trying to do this year’s puzzle/ With last year’s pieces..." was my fav part of the entire piece.


good work

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~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: Jun 14, 2008, 2:59:48 AM
:)
Thanks.

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