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[43 - Die]
28-03-08

She was attacked, in the dead of the night of her mind,
By the armada of pain and sadness.
Unprepared, even though her defenses are always fully armed,
They had conquered her before she even knew they had arrived:
Now she is alone, again,
As she is locked in their prison
Being tortured daily.

Pain and sadness, the minions of the ANTS;
Not just any ANTS...the giant, mutant ANTS.
Now even possibilities are dead,
And she wishes she could die with them...

Why did she sign that stupid contract?
    
     Oh, yes, it was to ensure that she was not chucked
     Unceremoniously, ass-first, into the money-eating,
     Time-wasting, "clinic."

So now she is stuck.

   She has a loophole, but she know if she fails
Like she is bound to do, failure that she is,
   She will still end up wasting their money
And her time.

But all she wants to do is go Home...
Where she will finally be rid of the ANTS,
Free of the pain and the stupid, unreasonable sadness.

Please...why won't you just let her go Home?
Tear up the contract, and let her go Home.
©2008 ~MagicalJoey
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Another one. Make of it what you will if you don't know me, and what you will if you do.

If you don't know what ANTS are, read my poem "ANTS" found here -->[link]

Home with a capital H refers to heaven. (Just for future reference in case I happen to use it again and it case you didn't pick up on that one.)

BTW, this is also a 100 Themes piece.

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~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: Mar 28, 2008, 1:18:26 PM
I wish I had the answer too. Or even just one answer that stayed with me and didn't leave me alone for no reason drowning in the middle of nowhere.

I love you too, you know that. Mark is an ass if he doesn't see how good you are...admition doesn't take away who or what you are.

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How much do you actually see, or are you just not bothered to look?
=Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Mar 28, 2008, 1:24:09 PM
Im not worth anything...and i dont have anything to offer him...
He has a right not to love me.. i just wish he'd stop with the mind games

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The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: Mar 28, 2008, 1:55:01 PM
You are worth more than you know - and far more than he deserves.
You are right about not having anything to offer him though...because he doesn't deserve what you have to offer as it's too good for him :hug: :cuddle:

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How much do you actually see, or are you just not bothered to look?
~khamwon1:iconkhamwon1: Mar 28, 2008, 5:11:27 PM
this is a very good piece.....and i mean it. The symbolism is so deap, the diction is fantastic, and the structure flows so nicely. This really showcased all of your skills....and it is perfect. wow....reading it a 2nd time just makes me speechless because it is such a great piece.

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~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: Mar 29, 2008, 4:38:07 AM
Thank you...and here I thought it was crap.

Diction.. :giggle: ...you reminded me of my English lecturer :D

Glad you liked it anyway.

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=Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: Mar 29, 2008, 5:25:04 AM
:( :hug:
Im not so sure ... he's left me

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.