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Lingering
18-01-09
For the one I Love

We’ve been parted for hours,
But your touch still lingers near – holding
Me close to you;
Possessing me,
Protecting me.

Parting was a sorrow not so sweet,
Yet your touch still ghosts my skin – caressing
Me gently with your fingertips;
Teasing me,
Loving me.

You’re in your part of the world,
And I’m far away in mine.
However I still feel you as close to me
As if your arms are cling-wrapped around me;
Your touch tingling me,
And your heart beating under my ear – every
Beat and every breath
Another second I have with you.
©2009 ~MagicalJoey
:iconmagicaljoey:

Author's Comments

...and no short supply of love.

:bulletblue: This has to be the longest run of "good" poetry ever submitted by me - hip, hop, hooray

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:D another :+fav: here.

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All I need is a pencil and paper, and those beautiful memories~

"It's so beautiful when the boy smiles..just wanna hold him."
:iconmagicaljoey:
hehe, thanks :)

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have you ever just wanted to turn a turtle shell inside out? you know, because why protect the outside from predators when it's the inside that has to deal with memories and the pain?

From "Always, Often" by *Solaces
:iconignitioninstars:
:hug:

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All I need is a pencil and paper, and those beautiful memories~

"It's so beautiful when the boy smiles..just wanna hold him."
:iconartemisfire:
O>O wow this is perfect for me and my boy
i feel tempted to send it to him... well written

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i write for all those i keep in my heart
:iconkhamwon1:
WOW- i have always been a fan of you work, and this piece is simply fantastic!
I really love how the first 2 stanza's echo each other in structure.
The overall story is fantastic...something I can relate to as well.

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[link] guaranteed to thrill, chill and fulfill you.
:iconmagicaljoey:
Thank you very much - I always look forward to your comments as they shed so much light onto whatever piece you are commenting on.

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have you ever just wanted to turn a turtle shell inside out? you know, because why protect the outside from predators when it's the inside that has to deal with memories and the pain?

From "Always, Often" by *Solaces
:iconmagicaljoey:
You can, just credit me :)

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have you ever just wanted to turn a turtle shell inside out? you know, because why protect the outside from predators when it's the inside that has to deal with memories and the pain?

From "Always, Often" by *Solaces
:iconartemisfire:
will do ^^

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i write for all those i keep in my heart
:iconpyrox666xpheebs:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw *wub*

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.

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