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My Doctor

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My Doctor
8-2-11

My doctor needs to buy a watch
That tells the correct time,
Because he's always running late;
This psychiatrist of mine.

He never answers messages
Within the hour they're sent,
Instead he waits for midnight;
He's playing with my head!

If I ever need his helping voice,
I don't think I will call,
Because I always get his voicemail,
Which doesn't help at all.

My doctor needs to buy a watch,
Or check his fancy phone,
'Cos if ever there's an emergency
I'll be stuck there all alone.
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Avenvia's avatar
This is a very poignant poem, but the rhythm is truly fast and excellent. Good technical skill with a sad subject =)