Prose Challenge Piece 3 for Learn2Crit-Lit

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Sigh…  I don’t disserve this, Danny mumbled to hisself.  He shoud never have took that artic cruse, if he had’nt, he woldn’t be sitting on top a floatingiceburg now.  If he was Superman he could of just flew to the Fortress Of Solittude.  But that don’t exist, I guess.  All that exits up here is ice, ocaen water, and pengwins.  And may be a solar bear or too.Hopefuly they wouldn’t mistook him for a walris.

Denny just wonderd if anyone else on the cruse ship new he was there hero.  He didn’t no if the ship didn’t have no sonar or what; but it was comeing way too closed to this iceberg here.  Every one nose how far ice bergs go underwater?  What if the ice was write under the ship?  The cap’n didn’t even shout a torpeto at it!  Danny didn’t want to yell Abanon Ship or any thing like that, and he didn’t knowwear the captain was so he thoght he needs to be the hero again.  They mite not have a torpedo , but they had a secret wepon weather they knew it, or not.  Four they had…Supersizedman!  Danny remebered how he climb up the raling, yelled “CANNONBALL!!!!!!!” and lept down in to the freezzing water below.  He didn’t feel ice craking under neath him when he slashed down.  So the iceberg must not have ben right under them, but he must of still saved every body, he made such a big wave that it pushed the ship a way.  There were advantiges to waying 400 lbs.

One of them was keeping warm, one was not needing to wurry about starving to deth for a while.  Which woodbe a very good ting out here.  I mean, he thougt, he did’nt even have his fishing rod.  And watt was he suppost to use for bate, his own blubber?!As years of fail dieting prooved, getting fat out offhimselfwas’nt the easiest thing never.

Suddenly, Supersizedmanspoted some men doun at the bottom of the iceberg holdin guns.  “What?  Who are those guise?  And why are they here?  Sqinting, Danny could bearly make-out what looked like a poler bare, it looked like it had no ideal the men where there.  “Are those men poacher?Whats wrung with them, try to kill an inocentKodak bear!  Their end dangered!  I’m gonna save that bare!  And who nose, may be heel give me a Coco-Cola!”

Pushing hisself foreword off the peek of the iceburg, the would be hero started slidding down on his butte; there was no time too changeinto his secret identty.  Leening forward too try tooslide faster, Danny suddenley fell andstardedrolling.  Piking up speed, the bloated wail of a man quiklygot coverred in snow and icy.  The polar bear at the bottom looked up to sea a giant snow ball rolling rite towards it ran away.  As Danny splashed down into the sea the other men ran two words him to figure-out what just happenned.  

With all there might they pulled the ice covered figure out off the water, look king at each otter.  When Supersizedmanrogainedconshusness, he was being dragged a way towards they’re truck.  “Who needs to catch a polar bear any way?  He herd one of them say.  We cot the Abomintable Snow Man!”