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Thank You Friends
23-01-11

She's tired of being alone;
Of not having that someone
Who loves her despite the scars,
Loves her despite her past,
Loves her beyond the outside, the cover.
She's tired of not getting flowers
From someone who loves her enough
To buy them, even if there is no 'occasion' to celebrate.



She's tired of having no money;
Of always having to beg
Despite her parents' embarrassment.
She wants to be able to buy her dog a bed,
Buy herself groceries,
But her family cannot afford it
And neither can she – unless
She sells cushions
Or someone needs proofreading.



She's tired of having to beg
Her online friends
From other countries,
But she needs to.
Do you know how that hurts her pride?
K.O – her pride lies on the floor,
Probably dead not just knocked to the ground.



She's tired of being the family problem.
But she has a dog depending on her survival
So she will not leave this world
Until it is her time.
She will not listen to the voices shouting,
"Cut" "Burn" "Kill"...
Even though ignoring them is sapping her strength.



She's just tired of everything,
But in the tiredness and racoon eyes
She can still say:
Thank you friends, I love you.
I'm so tired of begging, but I have to.

And to those of you who have donated, a huge thank you.
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Dark-Beauty Feb 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
well I am big on poetry, I don't understand everyones fuss on this because honestly it sounds like asking for pity more than a work of art. Don't want to hate, poetry is a release always, but i don't understand everyones fuss it's far from outstanding.
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flowerpuff Feb 26, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This is what I have been saying but any form of a negative comment with result in being eaten alive by her followers. Careful Dark-Beauty, giving out constructive criticism will piss off the others...
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Dark-Beauty Feb 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey if she don't want feedback then maybe she should get out of this site, critisism is a main component to art, people can't understand that. I won't sugar coat anything just because she can't handle it and she asks for pity. Which in any case, her problems are very minor compared to others...
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flowerpuff Feb 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
My thoughts exactly. Though it seems I have created enemies on this page...
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Dark-Beauty Feb 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nah don't see it as enemies. Just you've met more ignorant people on this world.
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DarkInuyasha7 Feb 24, 2011  Student Artist
keep on smiling though! you are extremely brave!
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:iconmagicaljoey:
Thank you.
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clrzia Feb 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
TT_TT.. very touching.. <3 and i hope you well!
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:iconmagicaljoey:
Thank you
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:iconauroaronkitten:
Deffinately needs some work, especially on the language. Poetry isnt just about telling a story, thats what literature is for. Study Blake, Poe, Coleridge etc....
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