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The Mouth of Her Heart by ~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey:





The Mouth of Her Heart
~Handle With Care~
[80 – Words]
8-05-08

She speaks;
And the curtain opens to show all
Her window-dressed world of pseudo-perfection:
Her frozen stage
Where she does not feel.

She writes;
And her soul takes the pen,
Attempting to speak what hides behind the tinted window:
To speak reality
No matter how dark.
Every word a mirror,
Reflecting in truth her hearts real brokenness.

Her heart lies, open, on little bits of scrap paper
Hidden within her walls.
As the ink dries on the paper scraps,
The words whimpered secretly by that broken soul
Are laid out, cold and ruthlessly bare:
Does she trust you enough to show you her pain?
Can she trust you enough to show you her words?

Will you mishandle the scraps of her soul she’s lent to you,
And break her further?
You tear her apart as you rip and tear her words to shreds.
Careless caustic comments corrode her already hollow heart.

Handle the words with care:
She writes often but reveals rarely.
Each word handed to you by trembling hands
Contains the warning:
Fragile soul,
Handle with care.
©2008 ~MagicalJoey
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80 - Words

Came from a conversation I had with ~YouCantUnderstand :iconyoucantunderstand: about writing poetry.

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~YouCantUnderstand:iconYouCantUnderstand: May 8, 2008, 3:35:47 PM
:hugs: Beautiful.

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"I scream into the night for you, don't make it true, don't jump, the lights will not guide you through..." ~Tokio Hotel "Don't Jump"
~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: May 9, 2008, 7:27:55 AM
:)
Thanks

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How much do you actually see, or are you just not bothered to look?
*Effamay:iconEffamay: May 9, 2008, 11:31:18 AM
that must have been one insightful conversation to produce this :wow:

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Dum spiro spero.
~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: May 10, 2008, 1:12:35 AM
It was actually more of a comment in passing but my brain took my comment and ran with it.

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How much do you actually see, or are you just not bothered to look?
~orange-and-fluffly:iconorange-and-fluffly: May 27, 2008, 7:35:24 PM
This is really good, i like the wording, and the way you took it from a convo.



If you don't mind can i show this to my youth director, you will get all the credit of course and i'll mention the fact that if came from a convo with ~YouCantUnderstand...
~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: May 28, 2008, 4:21:38 AM
Thanks :)

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How much do you actually see, or are you just not bothered to look?
=Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: May 29, 2008, 10:49:15 AM
This just leaves me speechless.
I wish i could hold you :hug:

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
~MagicalJoey:iconMagicalJoey: May 29, 2008, 10:59:46 AM
I have come to understand, if not accept, that there is nobody to hold me and that there never will be.

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How much do you actually see, or are you just not bothered to look?
=Pyrox666xPheebs:iconPyrox666xPheebs: May 30, 2008, 1:33:54 PM
If i could be there, i would hold you until i had helped at least a little.

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.